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Screenplay example: an annotated first page

An original screenplay example with each element explained: scene headings, action, character cues, parentheticals, dialogue and transitions, each shown in place.

Direct answer

A screenplay page is built from six elements: scene headings that say where and when, action that says what we see and hear, character cues, dialogue, the occasional parenthetical, and an optional transition. The example below is an original opening page that uses each one. On paper it is set in 12-point Courier at standard margins, the layout that lets a reader estimate running time from the page count.

On the page

Rendered example

An original opening page: two scenes, every element

EXT. HARBOR WALL - DAWN

Fog sits on the water. A row of fishing boats knocks against the wall, ropes creaking.

NELL HARGREAVES (60s), oilskin coat, reading glasses on a cord, checks a battered tide table against her watch.

Footsteps. TOMAS (17), her nephew, hood up, carries two coffees he has clearly spilled.

TOMAS

They were full when I left.

NELL

(not looking up)

The tide turns at six-ten. You were meant to be here at six.

TOMAS

It's six-oh-four.

Nell holds out her hand. He gives her a coffee. She sips it and winces.

NELL

Cold.

Out in the fog, an ENGINE coughs and dies. They both turn toward the sound.

CUT TO:

INT. NELL'S BOAT - WHEELHOUSE - MOMENTS LATER

Cramped. Charts pinned to every surface. Nell turns the key. Nothing.

TOMAS (O.S.)

Is that us or them?

NELL

Get the radio.

Evidence weight

What current practice favors

Widely expected

Six elements carry almost every page

On the example, the scene heading names interior or exterior, the place and the time of day. Action introduces each character in capitals with an age the first time we meet them and capitalizes the one sound the scene turns on. A parenthetical appears only where the words alone would be misread, a character heard from another room gets O.S. after the name, and the cut sits flush right.

Where reasonable writers disagree

Transitions are where writers disagree most. Some readers like an occasional CUT TO: as rhythm; others see it as clutter, since every new scene heading already implies a cut. Camera directions such as CLOSE ON or WE SEE split readers too. In a spec, use either sparingly and only when the shot carries the meaning.

Not one rigid template

Accepted variations

Widely expected

A spec script page

What the example shows: no scene numbers, no camera directions, and only the transitions that change how a moment reads. This is the page a reader, a contest or a representative sees.

Production-specific

A shooting script page

Once a script goes into production it gains scene numbers in both margins, CONTINUED and MORE markers at page breaks, and revision marks on colored pages. The words stay; the page now carries scheduling information.

Context dependent

A television pilot page

A pilot adds a teaser or cold open and act breaks, and some shows, multi-camera comedies especially, use a different house layout. Follow the show's own format when you have it.

Reader and handoff friction

Mistakes to avoid

  • Writing action as long paragraphs. Keep blocks to a few lines so the page reads at the speed it plays.
  • Using a parenthetical to direct the actor when the dialogue or the action could carry the beat.
  • Introducing a character without capitals, or capitalizing the name every time after the first.
  • Formatting by hand in a word processor, so margins and page breaks drift and the page count stops meaning anything.

Choose for the recipient

Submission versus production

Submission or reading draft

For a spec submission, keep the page clean: no scene numbers, no revision marks, standard Courier and margins, and a title page with your contact details. Check the opportunity's own rules on page count and file format before you send.

Production draft

When a script goes into production, lock scene numbers, issue changes as colored revision pages, and keep the spec as its own draft so the clean page stays available for submissions.

Working in Plot

Plot formats each element as you write, so scene headings, character cues and dialogue land on the right margins without manual tabs. The free screenplay templates hold complete example scripts for a feature, a short and a TV pilot; open one, write over it and export a PDF.

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Questions writers ask

What does a screenplay look like?

A screenplay is set in 12-point Courier with wide margins. Scene headings in capitals start at the left margin, action runs the full width, character names sit in capitals toward the center, and dialogue is a narrower column beneath them. The example on this page shows each element in place.

Where can I read real screenplays legally?

The Academy Nicholl Fellowships publish past winning scripts as free PDFs on their screenwriting resources page, alongside formatting tips. Read them for how a page moves, not only for the format.

How long is a screenplay?

A feature spec usually runs about 90 to 120 pages. One page per minute is a planning convention rather than a measurement: dialogue-heavy pages play faster and action-heavy pages slower.

Can I use this example as a template?

Yes. The scenes are original and free to write over. For a whole script to start from, open one of the free screenplay templates, which include a feature, a short and a TV pilot written out in full.

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