# Dialogue Pass

> Refine every line in a character's voice — accept or reject each rewrite.

A comprehensive dialogue refinement pass. It reads each character's voice across scenes, flags lines that sound generic, expository, or on-the-nose, and proposes tighter phrasings and subtext — each as an inline change you accept or reject, never applied on its own.

- Scope

  One scene, an act, or the full script

- Output

  Changes in the draft + a patterns report

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The pass, in miniature

Dialogue Pass · One scene, an act, or the full script Inside Plot

## Bring the work

- 01 The target scene, act, or script
- 02 The character's dialogue and actions across the draft
- 03 The surrounding scene for context

Run one focused pass

Dialogue Pass

## Review the result

- A proposed rewrite on each dialogue line, as inline changes
- A summary of the voice, rhythm, and on-the-nose patterns it found

One screenplay. One specialist lens. A result you can review where you write.

## When to reach for it

1. 01 A character's voice drifts between scenes
2. 02 Lines feel writerly, expository, or on-the-nose
3. 03 You want to tighten rhythm and subtext before a table read

## Where this pass stops

- Rewrite your action lines — this pass works on dialogue
- Apply anything on its own; every change waits for your accept or reject
- Invent new plot — it refines what a character already says

## Tune the pass

Parameters you can set when you run /dialogue-pass.

- Character Focus

  Limit the pass to a single character's lines.

- Intensity

  Light for word tweaks, moderate for line rewrites, or aggressive to reshape the scene.

- Preserve Voice

  Prioritize your style even where a line is technically improvable.

## About Dialogue Pass

Practical answers before you run the pass.

**Does the dialogue pass change my script automatically?**

No. Every suggestion appears as an inline change on its dialogue line — you accept or reject each one. Nothing is applied until you choose.

**Can I run it on just one character?**

Yes. Choose one character as the focus so you can tune one voice at a time.

## Related skills

- [Save Lines](https://www.inkwell.software/skills/save-lines)

  [An economy-of-language pass — tighten without losing meaning, and see the pages you save.](https://www.inkwell.software/skills/save-lines)
- [Tone Pass](https://www.inkwell.software/skills/tone-pass)

  [Map your script's emotional arc scene by scene and catch the tonal breaks.](https://www.inkwell.software/skills/tone-pass)

## Related templates and terms

- [Figurative language](https://www.inkwell.software/glossary/figurative-language)

  [Metaphor, simile, hyperbole and the other figures of speech, and how to fit them to a character's voice.](https://www.inkwell.software/glossary/figurative-language)
- [Simile](https://www.inkwell.software/glossary/simile)

  [How a simile differs from a metaphor, and how to pick a comparison only this character would make.](https://www.inkwell.software/glossary/simile)
- [Alliteration](https://www.inkwell.software/glossary/alliteration)

  [Repeated first sounds, and when a line that alliterates sounds rehearsed on purpose rather than by accident.](https://www.inkwell.software/glossary/alliteration)
- [Assonance](https://www.inkwell.software/glossary/assonance)

  [Repeated vowel sounds, and how they slow a line down or make it easy for an actor to say.](https://www.inkwell.software/glossary/assonance)
- [Consonance](https://www.inkwell.software/glossary/consonance)

  [Repeated consonants, and how hard or soft sounds change how a threat or a lullaby lands.](https://www.inkwell.software/glossary/consonance)
- [Oxymoron](https://www.inkwell.software/glossary/oxymoron)

  [How two contradictory words make a phrase like "sweet sorrow" mean more than either word alone, and when a character would say one.](https://www.inkwell.software/glossary/oxymoron)
- [Dialogue](https://www.inkwell.software/glossary/dialogue)

  [How dialogue is laid out on the page, and what separates lines that sound like a person from lines that only carry information.](https://www.inkwell.software/glossary/dialogue)
- [Antithesis](https://www.inkwell.software/glossary/antithesis)

  [Use balanced contrasts to expose what two characters value, and decide when a plainer line is stronger.](https://www.inkwell.software/glossary/antithesis)
- [Rhetorical questions](https://www.inkwell.software/glossary/rhetorical-question)

  [Show what a character assumes, and turn a confrontation when the listener answers anyway.](https://www.inkwell.software/glossary/rhetorical-question)

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